YOU DON'T NEED TO TELL ME THAT THE FORTRESS IS LARGE AND IMPOSING.
The word "fortress" is enough to suggest both those things. Save your description for the next time the protagonists stop by a cute and dainty fortress.
The cute and dainty fortress stood on the hill before them in the cloudless moonlight.
"So cozy, cheerful and welcoming!" exclaimed Lord Freddy. "Our mildly irksome foe, Sir Sydney, must surely be within. Let us start the preparations for a lavish brunch to draw him and his army of jolly-good chums out in the morn."
…It just writes itself!
Context is guarded by Narnian Mice and the Rabbit of Caerbannog.
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